Tuesday, November 11, 2025

November Playwrighting 10: Angels Weep No More Act 1 sc 1 (more)

 I don't know if this is where this scene should go, but I'm just letting it go there tonight. We'll see what I can map out on my day off tomorrow. Here it is in the raw.

                                PATTY

If we are going to get on with the game and win the million dollars, we have to tell them.

                                MARIE

This Janis is your contact and she has a shipment worth a million dollars? A million dollars could go a long way in the war effort. Where is this, Janis?

                                GABRIELLE

Crazy Americans! Is that why you are here? One of those reality television shows? All of these…this tonight…actors…sound effects….you spare nothing for these programs and drag everyone with you if we want to be a part of your entertainment or not. I do not give you permission. I know how this works. Million dollars. For who? For you? Why don’t you even know who these actors are supposed to be representing? You had me with Jim Morrison. I thought, “My God, the ghost of Jim is real, but what is Janis doing here?” Janis Joplin never lived in Paris, and who knows where she died.

                                                            PEARL

Landmark Motor Hotel in Hollywood.

                                GABRIELLE

Oh, so you do know! But for a million, you couldn’t study some French history? You came, typical Americans, unprepared.

                                PATTY

No, that’s not it. This isn’t part, at least I don’t think all of this is part of our game, and we aren’t on television.

                               GABRIELLE

I thought Americans did everything on television.

                                PEARL

Nearly.

                                MARIE

What is this television?

                               GABRIELLE

Very clever. The actors know their parts.

                               SARAH

Bien sur! That is life in the theatre!

                               GERTRUDE

Artist, sure. Not made for the stage. A rose is a rose is a rose is a rose.

                                PATTY

Think about this: why would any of these people be here even if they were actors? What clues are they giving? What is happening?

                                PEARL

Maybe this is like Thailand, where the street vendors gave us clues.

                                MARIE

Has Thailand joined forces with Japan in the war?

                                PATTY

What war?

                                MARIE

The Great War.

 


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